Debut of Jon Lum [12/06 XFA show] Part 1

~ On the Jumbrotron, the screen cuts to the outside of Dante's office. There is a new wrestler that appears and knocks on Dante's door. ~
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Dante: Come on in.
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~The new wrestler enters.~
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Dante: Well now, what do we have here?
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New Wrestler: Hello Mr. Dante sir. My name is Jon Lum and I have traveled all the way from China to be a part of your roster and Mr. Sentinel's federatoin. If you would just give me a...
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~Before Jon can finish his sentence, Dante cuts him off~
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~Dante: A shot? Is that what you were going to ask? Boy, I've heard this one often.
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~Dante doesn't seem interested.~
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~Jon: But you haven't even seen me wrestle yet. All my life, I've had to fight for survival. My parents were arrested for protesting in China when I was 14! I've had to fight for my meals. Now I want to fight for a shot on your roster.
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~Dante shows a little bit of interest.~
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Dante: You're a pretty big fella. How big are ya?
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Jon: I'm about 6'8 and 512 pounds or so. I've been losing weight for this.
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Dante: Good lord you're heavy! You ever wrestle before?
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Jon: Does street fighting for meals count?
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Dante: No. I mean wrestle. There is a ring and a ref.
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Jon: Oh, that kind. Can't say I have.
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Dante: Tell ya what, I'll give you one chance tonight to impress me. You're big and we can't train size. You get changed and get down to the ring and I'm gonna find me someone in the back and send them down to greet you...the XFA way. If I like what I see, maybe you'll stick around. Disappoint, and you are better off back in China.
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~Jon: Thank you sir. I will not disappoint. Anyone you want, send them down. I will show you that I belong here.
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~Jon Lum starts walking towards the locker room to change and get ready to debut.~

Good starting RP.
Keep it up!

I'll also post an intro and a post match rp. I'm thinking I'll lose so I'll rp that way. Let me know if I'm using words or an attitude that your wrestler normally wouldn't and I'll edit it.

So far so good. If anything doesn't suit my character, I'll change it once i implement it to the show.

Nice opening RP dude. Simple and effective, putting your charachter across instantly. Welcome to the fed.

Thanks. Looking forward to contributing to this top-notch fed even if I am by far the lowest ranked player in this fed.

Great opening rp Jon Lum, welcome to the fed.

Nicely done! lol simple, to the point and displays your character..... you'll fit in just fine

Very good! And welcome!

You deserve your welcome, Jon Lum. All the RPers are welcomed here.
And your was a good one, mate.

I hope you feel comfortable on XFE (XFW & XF:A).
And keep those RPs coming, dude!

I'm not sure if I'm still wrestling Jay Ammerman because he isn't appearing on the roster when I looked it up. I'll just leave my rp as is and do more for next show.

good job on the rp...they dont have to be long and complex...although those are great to see when you do them...but get your point across in character is awesome...you still are wrestling Jay...he just has not resigned yet bnut the match was set already...FYI

thanks for the info Darth