A Promo For The State Of Flux (Stable Warfare)

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~A video package begins highlighting the state of flux's recent domination~
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~The camera cuts to a line up of the group~
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Danny Danger: "Determination makes us."
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~It shows the group deciding a name~
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Pitbull: "Domination helps us."
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~It shows the brawl that ended XFA a few weeks ago~
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John Deep: "Athletes defines us."
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~It shows the aftermath of the TXF attack~
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Mr Jinter: "Strength represents us."
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~It shows them each after winning a match~
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Jay Thorn: "Unity bonds us."
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~The clip keeps playing with the finishers of each member and the beat down of TXF~
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State of Flux: "We are The State Of Flux!"
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~The package finishes up and the camera goes to ringside~
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*Use if you want*

EDIT: Is that better pitbull?

Cool. Maybe you could just make it more detailed on what it has in it. Kinda like add a happening between each statement or something.

Nice, I'm feeling it for one. I can ask Jay to check the edits once I leave the computer if you want.

sure, w/e you fell like

It's good, I dont have any ideas to improve on.

yay

i like it thats good as danny

Danny really has improved lately on a lot imo.

agreed getting much better now that hes focused on just one thing and not doing to much all at once