Saintly Sermon, XFA 9/26

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~The camera shows Saint Patrik in his wrestling gear, flashing his trademark gleaming smile, his brown ponytail pulled back hard, his black beard immaculately groomed. He speaks softly~
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Saint Patrik: "Yes, the leader of The Congregation is back. I have, as always, stood by my word. I made short work of The-so-called-Saviour. I showed him the error of his ways; that The Congregation stands for the only way to go forward, and that false prophets are not tolerated. I made him quit, and now he is nowhere to be seen. By the power of this accomplishment, and many others, I have earned my rightful place in the main event."
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~Saint Patrik's smile fades as his face turns serious and his voice sharpens~
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Saint Patrik: "Tonight I will share the ring with the repenting sinner Jesse Blue, whom I will barely tolerate in my ring. Jesse, you should know that I will not allow you to fail me. On the other side stands Tonten, the insane warmonger who lusts only for the senseless rattling of weapons. He shall know that true power lies beyond what any nation's army can muster, that power is nothing without the fulfillment of bowing down to the true way, the only way - the Holy Way of The Congregation! And then we have the reigning Aggression champion, The Dominator..."
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~Saint Patrik continues in a hard voice~
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Saint Patrik: "The Dominator is not a worthy champion in a clean and holy and moral XFA. He has proven nothing here more than beating The Dark One - which I also did. I was robbed of my honest and glorious victory against him, and we all know why. The Sentinel is threatened by what he knows will be his downfall: The Holy Congregation of Millions!"
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~Saint Patrik raises his voice~
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Saint Patrik: "The Sentinel, this unholy master of filth and immorality, stole the UXC from The Congregation. He took our shining beacon of hope, and thought he had us down for the count. But the UXC was but a minor goal on our way towards greatness and holiness. Now we want - no, we need! - the Aggression Championship!"
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~Saint Patrik gestures towards the heavens, his voice thundering~
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Saint Patrik: "Tonight, with the new season, The Holy Crusade starts yet again! We will grab the Aggression Championship and turn it into a relic of hope in these difficult times of despair. Tonight The Dominator will gaze upon our Holy Symbol, The Sign of The Cross, and he will bow down to The Congregation!"
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~Saint Patrik stares into the camera as the picture fades to black~
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Feedback appreciated, especially from the guys I mentioned.

man your rps are always great well done saint keep up the awesome work

As always... Very nice. You'll barely tolerate me... Love it. You even ganked me with the "shining beacon of hope" thng. We must fight again. This will be a good match. Between you and Tonten, I have come up with something. Wait for it... Wait for it...

Brilliant RP, nice work.

Their all right Saint it's a amazing RP no doubt about it

Go out there and kick some asses Saint. Awesome RP, as always

Upon re-reading, I have a feeling the RP has been edited... Never mind, it's definitely for the better!

I edited for the show.

Ditto what everyone else has said. You consistently deliver solid and interesting RP's that really help build up the shows/matches you participate in.

Can I get an Amen?!!

TheSentinel wrote:

I edited for the show.

And you did it well!

And yes, JD: AMEN!