gp pato introduces himself

* 'Fake It' by Seether is heard throughout the stadium *
David Hood: "Where is gp pato?"
Matt Scott: "He better come soon or we've wasted a promo!!"
* Something is heard moving around under the ring *
David Hood: "What's going on under there?"
* Suddenly gp pato jumps out from under the ring, busting a giant hole in the middle of the ring *
Matt Scott: "Unbelievable, how'd he get under there!!"
gp pato: "I've been here at XFW for about a month now, and I haven't even introduced myself.
* gp pato laughs demonicly at his rudeness *
gp pato: "So I thought maybe it was time I did."
* Flames erupt from the hole in the ring *
Matt Scott: "Holy crap, how is he doing all this stuff?!?!"
gp pato: "I would like to introduce you to someone very special to me, this is my father..."
* The flames disappear showing a dark figure *
gp pato: "Satan"

What do you think? Any suggestions?

really good i like how this is going... a Evil Clown who thinks the devil is weak, and the Son of Satan himself.. smells like an interesting Rivalry cooking up or a Beautiful friendship, or the last person who was in a match with me

gp pato wrote:

Is it alright, any suggestions?

its kinda LOL ending, but... c'mon, is your gimnick.
Maybe a darkness laugh could be impressive.

Don't worry gp pato, i'm still new at rping also, but the first thing everybody told me was to love your gimmick and have fun with it and rping will just kinda come natural to you. Plus most of mine come from things I have done just revised to a wrestling setting .

DANTE, if possible could you place this in the Forceful Aggression (June 7) show?

Jade wrote:

Don't worry gp pato, i'm still new at rping also, but the first thing everybody told me was to love your gimmick and have fun with it and rping will just kinda come natural to you. Plus most of mine come from things I have done just revised to a wrestling setting .

Well done, Jade. Thats the way we must live our lifes!

gp pato wrote:

DANTE, if possible could you place this in the Forceful Aggression (June 7) show?

I will try my best, but it is pretty full so far. I'll try and see if I can fit in the show though.

((LoL, I know I know, I was such a bad girl when I was in college before graduating and passing my boards and becoming a registered nurse. Now I have 12 hour shifts during the night which allows me to be online like all the time now since nothing exciting happens usually))

(if you lived in australia, you would hav no time if your a nurse cos rite now we got some problems our nurses are working long hours and are underpaid, not to mention infliation and high petrol prices)

((Ah it was insane when I worked in Florida and California, but I have moved recently to Colorado and actually am at a skiing / snowboarding resort kinda town for the hospital there so it's not like it used to be since we don't handle high trauma cases; just things like frostbite and such since I am actually the RN for adolscents / children working overnights now since the other nurse has about 32 - 34 years of seniority. The change in pace is different than when I was in Tampa and San Francisco; so it's all a matter of where you are at since we also have a huge shortage of nurses in the US. I used to be underpaid also until I figured I would go to a place where nurses aren't as easily expendable and the scenery is beautiful (lol, acutally my old TWG / first picture I used on here is me out at a frozen lake here in November) ))

oh yea i saw that one, i just mostly noticed yourself