Practice Promo

(first time actually Roleplaying, Dont expect this to be on the show seriously since its probly going to be kinda chopy and short >.< so this is like a Practice run.. please comment on your thoughts?)

Morbid's enterence theme kicks on as hi makes his way to the ring steping over the top rope and taking the Mic from the announcer.

"Tonight my match is with Hitman Smurf... Just another soul to be clown by the Dark Carnival. I cant wait to get him in my hands and make him bleed.the moment i lock in the Roar of the Wolf it will be 1..2..3.."

Music kicks on as he throws the mic down and storms out of the ring

Its always nice to see new role-players. So, congrats for start on it.
Just an idea: develop a bit more your gimnick. Maybe make some personal tics, like, I dont know, some tipical sentence, some constant wink, some hits on the commentors table...
Keep on the way, mate. Just the practice will let you develop an unique gimnick.

alright thanks Malkyto for your imput!

ill put that to mind next time

[[[Its a lot better, Morbid; let me congratulate you again. You have really make a profile of your dark-clown gimnick, and that ads a lots. Well done.]]]

[[thanks i really put some thought into this one, kinda gets hard to think of what to say... never was good at writeing my own storys but i think i could hopfully wing it]]

Morbiddistruction wrote:

Morbid's Enterence theme kicks on as he storms to the ring and climbs over the top rope riping the Mic from the announcers hand.

Matt Scott: Woah! looks like this guy isnt.. "Clowning Around!"

David Hood: Hey, i wouldnt be joking like that what if he heard you? he looks serious

Matt Scott: well we have seen Morbid Distructions in ring abillity-
David Hood: Yeah and that was Vicious to say the lease!
Matt Scott: well lets see what he has to say.

Morbid walks around the ring for a few letting the boos calm down giving evil smirks behind his painted face.

"Welcome to the begining. The begining of a new era, i have already claimed 2 souls that of HadesStar, and D01. I hear i have a new challanger now, his name is Hitman Smurf!"

Morbid chuckles a wicked sounding clown laugh

"The dark days are apon us, the gates of the Dark Carnival have once again been opened. I Morbid Distruction have opened them myself. God has made one mistake and that mistake was making me! You think Hells bad? wait untill you step through the gates into the Dark Carnival, I will show you Hell."

David Hood: Matt i told you he heard us!

"Hitman Smurf, you better be prepared for a fight to the death, Cause im going to make you feel pain like you never have felt, your just another soul to be Clowned!"

the lights shut off and loud carnival giggles feel the air, few seconds later the lights cut back on and Morbid is gone

Matt Scott: well remind me not to piss him off
David Hood: you bet

Graet promo, Morbiddistruction

thanks GP >.< really trying at this thing, was getting bored coming in here and having nothing to say so i thought i'd give it a swing

nice promo i definetly liked it

Best way to do it Morbid, lol, that's what I've done