Backstage ambush

*Dominator is walking through the corridor that leads to the ring

*An electrical problem appears, the lights start to blink

*Two black robes blocks Dominator's path, a third one appears from the rear

The Dominator: "What do you think are you doing, get out of my way".

Black Robe 1: "We go where we want, we get what we want, and also we can surround who we want".

*The Dominator pushs one of the Black Robes to the wall and try to pass, the hood of the Black Robe falls and appears Arisa, the Violent Madness secretary

Arisa: "Auch, that hurts".

The Dominator: "I won't hurt a woman. This is what Black Worthy has for me? Using weak women to stop me?

Black Robe 3: "You, son of a Female Dog, what have you done to Arisa?"

*The third Black Robe tries to hit The Dominator with a baseball bat, he is big, he is strong, but The Dominator is faster and dodges the blow

Black Robe 1: "Stop. We aren't here to harm him".

*The first Black Robe takes his hood off, and appears Plin

Plin: "Yet."

The Dominator: "I know that have to be you, Black Worthy dogs".

Plin: "We won't take your words lightly, we serve a bigger purpose. We are only tools of the gods, to bring chaos and destruction to this corrupt federation".

Plin: "There is also a purpose for you, there will be a time to choose, nearer you can imagine, and remember.....you can be with us, or turn to ashes by the Black Fire"

*The third Black Robe tries to attack a second time, but The Dominators isn't distracted and dodges, counterattacked with a punch at the abdominals

Black Robe 3: "I'll make you pay".

Plin: "Brainless partner, stop. Let him go, i will meet you another time tonight, this time at the eyes of your fans. Your fall is near".

Good RP.

HOwever, I'd make one change....

"The Dominator: "What do you think are you doing, get out of my path""

to

"The Dominator: "What do you think are you doing, get out of my way"

No one actually uses the word path in this manner.

After Dom's other Rp, he's going to be having a bad night.

Edited, thanks Die Hard, i have to strenght my english.

And yes The Sentinel, it will be a nice night to Doms.

Oh I would of probably added some lines of my own. Altough I like the idea of this could I just change some of the stuff I said an pm it to you??

Well here is a re-edit I done and fixed a few typos.


~The Dominator is walking through the corridor that leads to the ring~
*
~An electrical problem appears, the lights start to blink~
*
~Two black robes block Dominator's path, a third one appears from the rear~
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The Dominator: *The Dominator smacks his hand right across his face doing a face palm* "Not you guys again. I am not in the mood to be covered in black paint again!! Sentinel makes me pay for this ring attire you know!! So do you guys just mind well...pissing off".
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Black Robe 1: "We go where we want, we get what we want, and also we can surround who we want".
*
~The Dominator pushes one of the Black Robes to the wall and try to pass, the hood of the Black Robe falls and appears Arisa, the Violent Madness secretary~
*
Arisa: "Ouch, that hurts".
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The Dominator: "A women!?! So Worthy gets women to do his dirty work?? Well obviously this means I can't hit you.
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Black Robe 3: "You, son of a Female Dog, what have you done to Arisa?"
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~The third Black Robe tries to hit The Dominator with a baseball bat, he is big, he is strong, but The Dominator is faster and dodges the blow~
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Black Robe 1: "Stop. We aren't here to harm him.."
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~The first Black Robe takes his hood off, and it appears to be Plin~
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Plin: "...Yet."
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The Dominator: "I am assuming your Plin. My opponent of the Tournament tonight. I guess I shouldn't be surprised if I see this chump *pointing at the big robed man* and that chumpete *pointing at Arisa* at the match. Then again I guess I can't blame you because you ain't got no chance against me!!"
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Plin: "We won't take your words lightly, we serve a bigger purpose. We are only tools of the gods, to bring chaos and destruction to this corrupt federation".
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Plin: "There is also a purpose for you, there will be a time to choose, nearer you can imagine, and remember.....you can be with us, or turn to ashes by the Black Fire"
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~The third Black Robe tries to attack a second time, but The Dominator isn't distracted and dodges, counterattacked with a punch to the abdomen~
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The Dominator: "Dude you honestly didn't learn your lesson the first time did you"
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Black Robe 3: "I'll make you pay".
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Plin: "Brainless partner, stop. Let him go, I will meet you another time tonight, this time at the eyes of your fans. Your fall is near".
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~The black robes walk away with the 3rd black robe shoulder budging The Dominator when walking by him~
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The Dominator: "Idiots. If only they heard of Worthy's last attempt of destorying this business."
*

Ok, thx for the re-edit dom.

It seems good.

Your welcome.