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Cryl XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 990 Age : 54 Location : Germany Registration date : 2010-02-05
| Subject: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/20/2012, 5:11 pm | |
| Voice: "It will end as it started..." * ~the room lightens up in the locker room where Cryl sits in front of the record player, the chair moans under his weight~ * Girl: "Our savior and giant will gain strength through the music...do not underestimate him!" * ~out of the megaphone connected to the record player the music is heard. It is "Bus Stop" by The Hollies~ * ~outside the room Seraphim and Playboy stand discussing future plans~ * Playboy: "Cryl seems a bit off lately." * Seraphim: "He does not have the "bite" anymore, let me talk to him and see if I can't get his blood lust back up and running!" * Playboy: "Careful little sister, he still is a monster and who knows whats really going on in his head." * Seraphim: "Monster or not...he has to wake up, we need that blood lust against slugger and who ever he picks on his team!" * Mom: "Careful honey, Cryl is a time bomb waiting to explode." * ~The song slowly fades and Cryl carefully as if it was a baby takes the record from the player and sets it aside to only lay another record on the player~ * ~Seraphim opens the door as she hears "No Milk Today" by Herman's Hermits, knowing she has picked the right time to do this come what may to herself~ * Seraphim: "You big baby!!" * ~Cryl looks slowly to her and then back to the player saying only~ * Cryl: "Leave me be sister of mine!" * Mom: "Stop, don't tempt him..." * ~Seraphim shrugs off the warning and say's in a mocking tone~ * Seraphim: "Whats wrong big Brother...you getting soft now" * ~Cryl looks up and clearly seen under his mask he is fuming, with clenched teeth he warns~ * Cryl: "Little Sister...you best turn and leave the way you came." * ~Seraphim unimpressed throws over the table and replies in a hissing voice~ * Seraphim: "Or what...you going to scare me...tell me I will tap out...is that not what you do lately...make them scream for mercy and make them tap out?" * ~Seraphim bends down to Cryl's face and whispers to the masked man~ * Seraphim: "Does my big softhearted Brother now try to be a sissy and become his own SISTER!!" * Mom: "RUN!!! NOW!!" * ~before Seraphim can turn, quick as a cat in heat Cryl strikes~ * Cryl: "Sister of mine...." * ~Cryl picks her up with ease and throws her against the wall~ * Voice: "She asked for it Cryl..." * Girl: "My large Giant!! Stop!!" * ~Cryl get Seraphim in a choke hold as Seraphim grabs his hands croaking~ * Seraphim: "I will never submit you big evil baby!!" * ~Cryl squints his eyes and releases the hold only to hit her with a fist but that makes her forehead bleed~ * ~Seraphim on the floor wipes her forehead from blood only to continue mocking him~ * Seraphim: "Oh you finally pulled blood...FROM A GIRL!!" * ~Cryl picks Seraphim up as his blood rage starts~ * Seraphim: "Well there is the Brother I want to see!" * ~Cryl lifts Seraphim up in a fireman's carry across his shoulders as his eyes fill with the Blood Rage he throws the Seraphim's legs out in front of him to spin them out while he simultaneously falls backwards, driving the Seraphim's head into the overturned table executing a Crylion~ * ~Hearing the racket the Playboy walks in seeing Seraphim lying on the floor~ * ~Cryl still in a blood rage runs toward his Brother spearing him out the door. As Cryl slowly comes to his feet he picks Seraphim up again and throws her out to the hallway where she crashes against the wall and falls to a heap~ * ~Playboy now regaining his senses from the sneak attack from Cryl jumps to his feet and takes Cryl down with a body press pinning Cryl to the ground~ * ~All the commotion has brought others attention as the huddle around Seraphim with blood gushing out of her mouth~ * ~slugger comes through the crowd and bends to Seraphim as she coughs blood she say's to him~ * Seraphim: "I have awoke the monster...you are doomed" * ~as Seraphim passes out slugger looks to Cryl pinned under Playboy's weight Cryl say's~ * Cryl: "slugger.... you are next!" *
Slugger and Playboy if you want something changed let me know.
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DieHard
Number of posts : 1390 Location : Ottawa, ON Registration date : 2008-04-30
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/20/2012, 5:14 pm | |
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vince noir XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 247 Age : 47 Location : Kettering,Ohio Registration date : 2010-03-28
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/20/2012, 5:17 pm | |
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Cryl XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 990 Age : 54 Location : Germany Registration date : 2010-02-05
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/20/2012, 5:32 pm | |
| thanks guys... trying to get the "blood thirsty monster" back | |
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Worthy XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 2682 Age : 40 Location : Manchester, England Registration date : 2008-04-23
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/21/2012, 2:31 am | |
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slugger XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 1668 Age : 32 Location : melbourne ,Australia Registration date : 2008-05-01
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/22/2012, 4:14 am | |
| I'm screwed...
great roleplay! good way to bring back the beast! | |
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DieHard
Number of posts : 1390 Location : Ottawa, ON Registration date : 2008-04-30
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/23/2012, 9:36 pm | |
| If I can only make one suggestion....
to help the reader get a greater mental picture of the scene, could you substitute 'Victrola' wherever you used 'record player'? | |
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"The Natural" XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 684 Age : 53 Location : West Palm Beach Florida Registration date : 2008-11-02
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/24/2012, 7:54 am | |
| Nice idea with the antique turntable. Those are old and creepy. This whole thing is weird. I like it. Cryl is a freak! | |
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Cryl XFE Hall of Famer
Number of posts : 990 Age : 54 Location : Germany Registration date : 2010-02-05
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/24/2012, 2:52 pm | |
| I missed edditing it, hope sent or one of the vgm's could do the suggestion of playboy. Thanks Jesse, really happy about your comment thats what I was aiming for. | |
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DieHard
Number of posts : 1390 Location : Ottawa, ON Registration date : 2008-04-30
| Subject: Re: Seraphim awakes the Monster! 4/24/2012, 3:24 pm | |
| Yeah, there is definitely something creepy imagining a huge monster in a mask gently holding a record, placing it on the record player and slowly putting the needle down. | |
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