06/07/08 Match Card

Welcome to XFW:Aggression!
A Vice GM in Charge
HadesStar vs. kangjagal
Can She Ever be on Time?
Master_Neto vs. Diamond troy Justice
TheDominator and his Contract
Jade Bachman vs. GodsBlood
Playboy's Outburst/Diamond's Proposal
Volgo vs. gustave1er
Unhappy Slugger....
Starvin vs. D01
GodsBlooD's Farewell?
HitMan Smurf vs. Morbid Distruction
Worthy of an Invitation
Dark Forces vs. Fatal Strike
Cold Blooded Killers' Backstage Interview
TheDominator vs. Officer Garcia
NLO Speaks
Extreme Fight Championship: bleeding face vs. gp pato

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[Alright guys, this is the show. After the show, please provide with some constructive criticism and be brutally honest. I think the show might be way too long but I tried my best to get everyone involved and include what everyone wrote. However, if there are some who got left out, I am sorry but there was just so much I could include. I tried my best and it might nto be up to Sentinel status, I hope I did a decent job and that's all I could say about that. So please, ENJOY!]

((I wouldn't worry too much Dante, I need to start shortening my role plays now that we have a more active role play forum lol! *looks at her position on the card* Yay, i'm not a jobber anymore, i'm a jobber first class now ))

As long as it goes together well, I think you will have no problem

well [the FCC refuses me from using this word] i think its going to be a great show personally

It looks pieced together very well. Can't wait to see the finished product.

Jade wrote:

((I wouldn't worry too much Dante, I need to start shortening my role plays now that we have a more active role play forum lol! *looks at her position on the card* Yay, i'm not a jobber anymore, i'm a jobber first class now ))

I didn't man to make you a "first class jobber," the way everything got set-up, it just ended that way. I promise, next time I will make you a "Superstar Jobber."

It all looks good, I think this show wont disapoint.

**This post contains spoilers after the card don't read further if you don't want to know**

After reading the whole card first thing I've noticed is the close out of the card. I really don't see too many other federations actually close out a card, it's kinda just have the last match and that's it, no build up to the next show or anything so kudo's on that!

Loved all the twists especially with the Officer Garcia vs. The Dominator! That was soooo unexpected lol.

And the in-match commentary really added another dimension when reading since we all know what a match looks like so it broke it when reading especially when hard-hitting trademarks and finishers were brought into play.

From reading it seemed like everything flowed and possibly gave hints to the future. I.e. you announce that the Sentinel is gone this week and every bad thing that can happen to a manager happens to you on that same night (I don't know if it was intentional but it was an awesome plan if it was)

I liked the spacing of the match so that it just didn't look like a bunch of words all together, overall a very good show since it seems that there is a lot of contribution here especially from the people role playing so kudos to everyone!

i must agree i feel it was went together perfectly! Good show Dante

4 draws unbelievable, that's gotta be a record for the most draws in a show of any fed

*bit of a spoiler*


That so far is my favourite show and man that interference by you and worthy unbexpected. I tought Worthy was gonna attack me, but got you instead. Atlough I wish you could of did it after I kicked Garcias ass jks jks lol.


Oh and Jade maybe your segments could go a bit shorter lol

LoL, I know I had a minor in English Studies so I write alot sometimes, but with everybody contributing so much, i'll cut them down since I was really just looking for an angle to put myself into with those that aren't currently in any types of feuds and such.

awe you didn't even put my promo in the show

Dark Ryder wrote:

awe you didn't even put my promo in the show

what promo was that?

Aw, it's okay Dark, you know what will make you feel better? I'll give you a free autographed Jade poster once I figure out the pictures I would like to use

the promo after playoby made one, and haha okay jade

Dark Ryder wrote:

the promo after playoby made one, and haha okay jade

I think it boiled down to a choice of which one to post after - the one continuing our Aggression feud, or a new brewing feud. Since I'd assume that our next fight will and should be our last regardless of the result, this is the point, I guess, where building new rivalries/feuds was thought as the best course of action.

hmmm seems that if its a tie then champion keeps title, so yeah, i'd say just one more, unless i lose, in which case i want a rematch, mostly cuz most champions use that rematch clause and i'd just feel left out if i didn't do it to

Dark Ryder wrote:

hmmm seems that if its a tie then champion keeps title, so yeah, i'd say just one more, unless i lose, in which case i want a rematch, mostly cuz most champions use that rematch clause and i'd just feel left out if i didn't do it to

Hey, we'll see ,bro! It all depends on where Sentinel wants to go after. We could just keep the belt going between us 2, no problem!

lol haha ya we could i say you've had your rematch, so if i lose i'll get one more rematch, after that it would be done, i'd be up for that for being the most

Dark Ryder wrote:

awe you didn't even put my promo in the show

Sorry about that. Like I said before, I can't put everyone's promo's in the show since we have so many active role players here, plus you were already part of the main event.

Also, the promo just seemed a bit random and seems more like towards the Vice GM than Playboy. It will probably be included in the next show though since it is a good set-up, it just felt a bit random and a bit unknown at who it is for. Also, with the Rebels forming, Diamond's promo/segment just fit better after Playoboy's promo.

Again, sorry it didn't make the show but it will see the light of day, maybe, in the next show.

Jade, I would like to thank you for your compliments. The only thing I completely forgot were the borders separating the segments and matches. I thought it was automatically inserted on the show since there were a couple of them but I guess I was wrong.

Also, to anyone else, if there is any, please provide some contructive criticism of the show if possible. I would like to see what I could improve on.

Thanks.

1 question. why was the show so wide? usually it seems to almost all fit on the screen but this time had to scroll left and right to see it all. The show was awesome though. 4 draws? come on. You only see a draw about 1 out of 50 to 60 matches. But on the title matches those are kinda cool, it can kep up the feud between those two since it was not settled. maybe then do a rematch that is first blood or submission to force a winner either way.

darthclay wrote:

1 question. why was the show so wide? usually it seems to almost all fit on the screen but this time had to scroll left and right to see it all. The show was awesome though. 4 draws? come on. You only see a draw about 1 out of 50 to 60 matches. But on the title matches those are kinda cool, it can kep up the feud between those two since it was not settled. maybe then do a rematch that is first blood or submission to force a winner either way.

I think it was the "cold bloodied Killers' logo

i belive one of the Sentences was just way to long thats what caused it to be so wide

i stand corrected GP Pato is correct the "The Cold Blooded Killers"'s logo is what caused it